I only one critique. The part of the story where he fights The Mountain is great except for the fact that he's making a bunch of references during the fight. He's doing this in a fight against a man who killed and ra#ed the woman he loved. I'm not sure how to describe it, but it makes the fight seem less meaningful. I'm not sure if that was the point, but it still feels like it could have been handled better.
JManM
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giốngJManM:He'd already pre-loaded the emotions of that fight several chapters prior. At that point he was just yoloing. A 'if you 're already sliding on the ice, you might as well dance' situation. For him it was more about putting on a show than taking passionate revenge.