Review Detail of vorlefan in Traveler's Will: Chronicles of the Lost Worlds

Hey there, author here xD If you have any questions about the novel, you can leave reply here! 1. First, I must say that this is my first attempt to write and create a novel, my only experience in this regard is that I have read tons of novel. So please, if you have tips, send me. 2. The english language isn't my mother language, so if there are gramatical error or strange sentences, please let me know. 3. How often are you updating? Well, currently I work as a freelancer software engineer — I need to make a living xD, so I'll try to maintain at least 1 chapter per day. 4. What to expect? Comedy, dark scenes, heated enemies, ruined society, interesting worldbuilding and a unique cultivation system.