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Review Detail of Lackada1sical in Good or Bad, Does it matter? (Harry Potter Fanfic)[TN]

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Lackada1sical
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Initial Review: Great Potential (As of Ch#12) WQ: With less to no mistake grammatical errors and a well thought storyline, plus long chapters. 5/5 SD: With an average to fast pace development without affecting the story & MC progression. In addition, this pre-cannon is better as author-san was able to avoid the HP-verse trap & plot holes even though MC doesn't have foreknowledge by utilizing what he already have which is a plus. 5/5 CD: MC is not that OPaas he just utilzes what Snape already has and his previous life knowledge/experiences plus his high intelect and out of the box strats' which help him overcome the schemes and plot of HP-verse. Finally someone managed to utilize chaotic-neutral persona that is on the grey-side of HP-Verse. 5/5 US: For a beggening FF the update is quite good as author-san is making sure to prioritize quality over quantity. 5/5 WB: As the story is still in the development phase we haven't noticed any other branch of magic or part of the magic world explored. 4/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

Good or Bad, Does it matter? (Harry Potter Fanfic)[TN]

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Wilder6
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Who would be discouraged by a 24/25 review lol 🤣🤣👍

Wilder6
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Besides that, love the story so far too, I think it could be something great if not dropped. Keep it up 👍

Tzevaot
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who is love interest

Blacksheepy
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Cudos to you for writing genuine constructive criticism and not straight up downplaying the ff or writing straight up immature comments like many others I have seen on this app.

jjjakio
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Bellatrix

Tzevaot:who is love interest
Robocop_123321
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Holy that’s random

jjjakio:Bellatrix
RegalObscure
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Not so according to extended lore, Bell is not only magically powerful but extremely beautiful as well but years of exposure to boldimort, her canonical husband, husband's brother plus truly vile black and dark magic as well rituals took away all her quality appearances. If I am not wrong at some point she was the most beautiful of the tree black sisters.

Robocop_123321:Holy that’s random
Robocop_123321
Robocop_123321Lv4Robocop_123321

Huh interesting

RegalObscure:Not so according to extended lore, Bell is not only magically powerful but extremely beautiful as well but years of exposure to boldimort, her canonical husband, husband's brother plus truly vile black and dark magic as well rituals took away all her quality appearances. If I am not wrong at some point she was the most beautiful of the tree black sisters.
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RegalObscure
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three*

Robocop_123321:Huh interesting
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RegalObscure
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*Three Black sisters. Not freaking tree, it's 3. I should've just write the number 3.

RegalObscure:Not so according to extended lore, Bell is not only magically powerful but extremely beautiful as well but years of exposure to boldimort, her canonical husband, husband's brother plus truly vile black and dark magic as well rituals took away all her quality appearances. If I am not wrong at some point she was the most beautiful of the tree black sisters.
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RegalObscure
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Forgot to mention years of exposure to Dementor in Azkaban. In my imagination Bellatrix should looks like Eva Green in her earlier year plus the grace of last empress of Austro-Hungerian Empire ( wife of emperor Franz).

RegalObscure:Not so according to extended lore, Bell is not only magically powerful but extremely beautiful as well but years of exposure to boldimort, her canonical husband, husband's brother plus truly vile black and dark magic as well rituals took away all her quality appearances. If I am not wrong at some point she was the most beautiful of the tree black sisters.
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Smurf_1946
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less to no grammatical errors? I've only read to chapter 4 but it's full of grammatical errors, not to the point where it's unreadable but it's definitely making me want to stop reading