Review Detail of StromLantern in An Otherworldly Magician [HP X Marvel]

The translation is off, maybe not extremely, but enough to make it difficult to understand, thus far the stability of updates is good, but its mostly because its a translation done on the quick. Story seems fine so far, and the world background is quite flushed out what with it being based off established universes. All in all, read if you like HP fan fics and you're running dry.