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I dont know why no one has addressed it yet but it is very difficult to read this story. There is no continuity. In one scene we are reading about MC and then cut to some scene between some OCs from the middle without any context and then suddenly cut to some other MC scene in the middle of it or his thinking. It is even more difficult to read than a Chinese MTL. I can ignore the massive grammar and pronouns change issues but this break the story immersion for me. It would be a good read if you can ignore these things as decent hxh novels are very difficult to find here.

Lord Of Hunters - Hunter X Hunter

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Thank you for helping me out. I will try to edit the story as the time goes on.