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i haven't gotten the chance to read through everything yet but what i have read is quite touching and a bit hard to read (for me personally, having gone through similar things). i know the story is over now, but i think what would have made it more engaging is a bit more exposition at the beginning. getting to know the MC and her struggles more yk? the writing is really good though, looking forward to seeing your next story !

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Thank you for the advice! I will try to apply it to my next book ;)