This story seems to have a good starting point so far. I did like how you went into the action. Next I would recommend going more into details about other ultimate's since some of them might be curious about what you done to earn your fake ultimate title. Depending on how well your OC can lie other characters will grow in suspicion about your OC ultimate.
NyanGod371
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