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2023-01-18 06:39

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New Life In DXD (Rewrite in progress)

dreaming_dog
3.8
18 Chs

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CruelReality
CruelRealityLv4

Anyone who is saying this is good has an incredibly low threshold for what they consider “good”. The MC, regardless of some dumb choices, should be incredibly OP based on his wishes. However, the MC is effectively nerfed due to his intelligence being less than a lobotomized squirrel. I cannot tell if he makes poor choices and decides to not use the majority of his tools because the author is deliberately choosing to make him act dumb to avoid him becoming too op or because the author themselves is too dumb to write a character that uses these wishes with even a scrap of effiency. For example, he recklessly nearly crippled himself by using substantial magic at a young age before being able to gauge consumption. He then proceeds to waste years in an orphanage as a partial cripple when he could easily heal himself with his powers and escape from the orphanage and live a good life. The author has barely passable grammar but makes mistakes such as spelling roam “rome” and tier as “tear”, though my main issue with the story is still the utter stupidity and squandered tools of the protagonist. I highly reccomend avoiding this story unless you are comfortable watching a moron squander every opportunity imaginable and use divine tier tools so poorly that he nearly cripples himself immediately…

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Zekril
ZekrilLv4

I can understand his choices if he is a kid or died while in a confined location But he is a 28 unemployed otaku so i don't understand why thats his choices from power to decisions .

1yr
Left_Nut_Of_Madara
Left_Nut_Of_MadaraLv13

Eh first chapter made me think it will somewhat ride cannon so meh but its easy to read so dude can write just needs some inspiration or creativity.

1yr
hde
hdeLv1

way to op and basic hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

1yr
Lizrock
LizrockLv4

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dreaming_dog
dreaming_dogAuthor

Nice good story enjoyed it read it over night had a good sleep then read it again nice........................................................................................

1yr
Skaviouz
SkaviouzLv14

I was going to type a long rant, then realized I was going to be too hypercritical on a SI wish fulfillment fanfiction with crossover elements. I added this series to my library and rated you 5/5 stars. You like it or not.

1yr
George_Amil
George_AmilLv4

nice story please don't drop it .........

1yr
Mathias_Irusta
Mathias_IrustaLv3

Un incentivo! Espero sigas con este trabajo! 😁😁 Por el momento va bien, sigue así 👌👌👌👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

1yr
yugpug
yugpugLv4

Good book with good potential keep going

1yr
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