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Item: Riot academia
Rating: 5

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AnimeTagzLv49mthAnimeTagz

The story itself is interesting and the plot is great but i find myself getting put off by writing style. Maybe that's just not my preference but it almost seemed as though i was reading a diary instead of a novel. Lol, not that I'm any better tbh. Keep up the good work and continue to improve.

Riot academia

UniqueKarma

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UniqueKarmaTác giảUniqueKarma

I have taken care of the writing problems and spacing please take your time to go through it again for any more problem. And thank you again for your time.

6mth

UniqueKarmaTác giảUniqueKarma

Thank you for the review, and do i need to change my writing style

9mth

AnimeTagzLv4AnimeTagz

Not completely... This is only my opinion but I feel you just need to occasionally move away from a characters's perspective and describe the situation around them to make not feel like a collection of perspectives on a dairy

UniqueKarma:Thank you for the review, and do i need to change my writing style

9mth

UniqueKarmaTác giảUniqueKarma

ok that sounds more better, Thank you, i will try that out on my next chapter.

AnimeTagz:Not completely... This is only my opinion but I feel you just need to occasionally move away from a characters's perspective and describe the situation around them to make not feel like a collection of perspectives on a dairy

9mth