Review Detail of Xalysian in Point of Return

Very impressed with this book's start so far, loved how fitting you included the perspective writing that it flows well and rolls off the tongue. Maybe, I should ask you to become my teacher of proofreading, haha! Anyway, I can't wait to see more of the story as it goes on! Keep it up, ya legend! Loved the MC's friend, such a fun character with his exploitative tricks.