Review Detail of DeletedSassdff in Naruto : Path of Triumph

I mean, the writing from a pure grammatical standpoint is pretty flawless. Good transitions as well as decent structure. However, that is it; there's nothing else for me to say good about. The story is simply bland; the writing is bland with no detail or exposition. Everything is written like I'm reading an explanation of some sort. It's simple as... nothings engaging me to read. Where's the showing of mc interacting with others? Where's the unveiling of showing how MC is truly feeling? Why does it feel like I'm reading a bland archetype of a character with no soul to him? Author, I suggest you to detail and outline you fics before writing. That's all I have to say to be honest. I'd give it a generous 2.6/5