Review Detail of 0Mashroom in Project Salvation: Rise of the Venomous Snake

Have read 5 chaps of this novel. first I like the mc his very smart and has some sense in him to other stories that have a similar concept to this who had characters who are ignorant and cocky the authors say it is part of their charters but when it comes to the end of their stories they didn't even change. Okay the writing needs some improvement when it comes to action scenes sometimes it feels short and lacks some, I'm not saying that your writing is bad, and your grammar is alright but in case of miss typos recommended for you reread the chap before uploading. The story got some lore I'll say that the world-building is still confused about what setting this takes place idk probably just me, I might read more chaps to fully grasp what's going on. but overall a good read for killing time