Review Detail of CetusWritings in Chosen of the Stormlord

The novel is okay although the writing quality in your work could be better since there were a bunch of grammar mistakes I saw but after all of that it seemed pretty good. The character designs and the way you put out their emotions and actions are great, the pace is good for me but I have been told that I like fast paced novels so the other reviews might be correct about it being fast paced. The world building is good, it's very detailed so I definitely think this novel could become better if you work on your grammar or get something or someone to edit it. All in all it's a good novel and I hope it will continue to improve as it's story goes on.