Review Detail of NovaEre in Phantom of Hatred

Hello. Thank you for the review. It's just a pity you didn't write more. I'm relatively new to novellas, and I crave every opinion and every mistake I make. Honestly even I know this novella isn't great. Maybe not even good. And that's why I want to keep improving. I don't know where you ended up, but with a better understanding of the world, I would have read at least to chapter 15 and then written a review here. Thanks a lot for the review, and good luck.