What a good start. I've only read a few chapters but how the novel introduces the character is great and really characterizes him. Although the massive explanation in chapter 3 broke my immersion, it was rather interesting. I would work on your punctuation and fix a few grammatical errors but overall solid, and I can't wait to read more.
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