I really enjoy the story so far with good grammar. The only real issue I have with the story is a lack of a difficult problem for the MC to deal with. It is really difficult to create tension if your going to deal with shadow games. Since you can pull out modern decks to deal with everything. Otherwise it a really great fanfiction to read.
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