4 chapters in and the story is already fast paced and mc is already making moves, not bad, but you should take some time to explain the world circumstances and all, would building is just as important as character development good job with the writing though
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giốngMindblowned bro. Thanks a lot, I really wasn't expecting anything. you just made my day, was wondering where the collections were coming from 😭🤣😭🤣😭. Keep pushing bro, and I look forward to your future chapters. And thanks a lot for mention.
DaasWolfe:[img=update] my brother i would love to thank you, once again. for your advice i have finally reworked my novel, i have mentioned your book in my novel and i hope more people will read your master piece.