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The prologue was quite interesting, and the way you described the scene as well as the main character's final thoughts was just *chef kiss* fucking good, so I'm going to give it a score of five out of five. My conundrum is trying to figure out what was happening throughout the entire scene, such as whether it was an ambush, a chance encounter, or something else entirely. It seemed as though the details of the scene were all over the place. But every story has its flaws. (or maybe I'm just suffering from some kind of mental lag after the lack of sleep and forcing myself to write for extended periods of time), but it's still a five out of five star. Also, extra points for not glorifying war with heroism, nationalism, and patriotism.

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Liked it!

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