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I'll be honest. This has been the worst book I have ever read! There's something wrong with the sentences, no proper punctuations and the paragraphs... they are too unattractive for readers! Your writing lacks imagination, and it is too ordinary for webnovelians. If you want to write something that will catch my attention or any other readers attention, study the app. Not only that, make some researches, study more about writing and learn how to world build. Telling you this because if you want to be out there, you have to be good. This isn't the best. It's trash! You're welcome.