Review Detail of SarmelAC in Essence of it All (DxD Essence Meta CYOA)

Thanks for the review! Like I said in my own review, this was my first story. I was still rather raw when it came to putting together a coherent and natural-feeling plotline. I'm mainly just publishing it for posterity's sake. I feel like it gets somewhat better later on, but what the story really needs is an entire rewrite that I don't have the time to do, unfortunately.

it's fine dude just write what you think is fun, you'll improve along the way

ok, no problem, I can more or less tell you how hard it is to create a story, and that you are trying is already a lot. You know what you can do, if at some point and I hope it doesn't happen, you can come back later when you have polished your writing and try to edit the beginnings. So that the newcomers who come to read the story will enjoy it more. I wish you the best with this story and your future stories (translator).