The grammar is fine, some annoying parts that are hard to miss. Story goes by fast, but after each timeskip there is a small rundown as to how Amaru has been doing which is fine by me. While Amaru is plain and pretty emotionless, the few times that she does show some emotion is good, humor goes fine by her character. King is also a good addition to Amaru. Don't know how frequent the updates are but what I do know is that this story is being updated. Not much world background, but a fine amount is told to us by a few sentences.
God_Of_Wolves
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