Review Detail of Chaddts in reincarnated as Nawaki with an odd food system

Its a fanfic so the score will always be low due to the world building a character already being done. So this first chapter is rushed and lacks punctuation. Entire paragraphs are written like a sentence and many lack any punctuation at all. I don't see this finishing or being well written in any way. Reads like a 12 year old has failed English class.