I don't really have an objective review star wise, but since you seem to know what you're doing, I'll give you 5 stars. Call me biased, but on top of displaying proper grammar and a unique System, this is also a non-harem story with Ganyu being the main love interest? I think you've made a really good first impression on me so far with these first two chapters (at this point of you writing your story), so keep it up. I look forward to seeing what you put out next. I do have to ask though, Pokemon Violet is a thing, so obviously he's from 2022, so is this an 'AU' Earth where Genshin isn't a thing or does he just not know about Genshin Impact, so he wouldn't know about Teyvat at all?
WinterFlare
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