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Some slight mistakes with the grammar but it's just one or two words every chapter, not enough to make reading impossible. The writing is also somewhat bland. So far the FL seems genuinely independent, I hope it doesn't devolve like most FL novels I've read where they become very dependent with their partner later on.

Rebirth of the Bloody Witch

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Thank you for the review. I changed the first chapter and I'll try to improve chapter 2-7 afterwards. I hope you like it, and please feel free to point out errors, mistakes, or any sorts of problem with the chapters. Thank you again for the review!