Fine story. The transition between Ayame's normal magic to cultivation is natural, as she meant to struggle with meditation as mana use different than qi. Worldbuilding is good but I want to learn more about the old world as something different than Ayame's suffering or her happy memory in future chapters. Would recommend.
Tentacult1664
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giốngThank you for your review! I'll try to add more happy memories from her past life, but there really isn't much considering negative experiences stick more with a person as she grows up and the incident happened after her graduation so she only had about 18 years of normal life before it gets ruined.