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2023-06-28 23:38

The plot seems promising and I really liked how you portrayed the situations and emotions. I love your writing style! There are som little grammar mistakes but I know you can improve it, Author! Keep it up!

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Thank you very much for your review I deeply appreciate it 😊 I'll do well to improve 🤧🤧🤧

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