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good novel although it is a bit cliche ........................................................... ........................................................... ........................................................... ........................................................... ........................................................... ........................................................... ........................................................... ........................................................... ........................................................... ........................................................... ........................................................... ........................................................... ........................................................... ........................................................... ........................................................... .............

不要让这让你分心,疯狂的女孩是最好的女孩。

Tentacult1664

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From my perspective, it would be a bad idea if the MC starts pestering the monsters that are helping him. They could kill him if they wanted to. It would just cause unnecessary rift in their relations. Other than that though, you are right about the whole finding a powerful monster at the first/second chapter and taming it. I didn't realize how much isekai manga had that trope until I read a couple ones few days ago. Also, thank you for your input. It's my first time writing one, so it's kinda hard to know what I'm doing wrong. So once again, thank you for reading this novel and sharing your input 🙏

Aaron_Aguilera_2568:Regarding the cliche, it is because suddenly he has subordinates without trying (plot convenience), he does not try to get more into the information of why they follow him when he already knows that there is something strange (protagonist a bit dense), it is not 100% a cliche novel and it is not a bad novel either but that is something that I do not like personally and it shows where the novel is going
Homelander69
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how?

Homelander69
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how?

Aaron_Aguilera_2568
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Regarding the cliche, it is because suddenly he has subordinates without trying (plot convenience), he does not try to get more into the information of why they follow him when he already knows that there is something strange (protagonist a bit dense), it is not 100% a cliche novel and it is not a bad novel either but that is something that I do not like personally and it shows where the novel is going

Homelander69:how?