Review Detail of blackrose0231 in Ashen Sun

This is a lovely piece of work. Yes, I'm not so much a fan of stories like this, but I have to give praise to the author. You made me enjoy the story even from the very first chapter. Although, I got a bit confused from the switching of Povs, and there were a few punctuation and grammatical errors, but with a little editing, this story is bound to flourish. Great work.