Review Detail of FallenZyphl in sadfdsaga

I've only finished 2 chapters. The way the story is going is quite interesting. The only weird thing here is the writing format. The author uses [Line Break] to change between 1st and 3rd person style instead of just saying [1st person] or [3rd person] or just stick to 1 style. Another one is that it's confusing to guess who is talking since the author uses this weird format where instead of the usual: Someone hit the back of my head, 'I hit you.' says Adam. The author makes it like this: Someone hit the back of my head, 'Adam' I hit you.