Review Detail of missmisslala in THE LEGEND OF LA SIRENE

I really like it. The story is awesome. Its very relatable on some poimta for me w/ the foster care and being separated from siblings the story's flow is nice I cant wait to see what Nate discovers and how she handles it and if her brother Max will be getting involved. This has a lot of potential w/ some minor editing and some more dialogue this will be a great book! I was hopimg for another chapter four wasn't enough I hopw you will check out my original works too Im always lookimg for any advice thats what we have to do for each other as authors so we can get better at what we love to do p.s pls update soon