I feel like there could be a little more background on the kingdom that she is living in. For example, where and when (like what century) this is all taking place in, because while you can guess it is probably in medieval, but The author could build more on it. I also think that there were some grammar issues (not major so just mentioning it). Overall it has a really good plot though and is definitely going to be a recommendation to new readers.
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