Review Detail of Chips_8019 in Playing Firebending (Legend of Korra SI)

The characters are stereotypical the grammar is awful and hard to read the novel has only 20 chapters so far though so I'm unsure if they will improve. because of how awful the English is it makes some scenes just cringey for example the Mc said to taunt someone "deliver my love to your mother he can't help support her child." Then he responded with I am the only sibling in my family you should check to know what to say. ??? this is just bad. because of how many 5 star reviews this has on top of the power chart and how few chapters this has im almost 100% sure this author has some bots to blow up the novel.