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superAyanLv131yr
2023-08-30 21:10

Only has three chapters so I don't know how the story will progress other than from what I read on the synopsis. The flow of the plot is good but the writing needs editing^^ I would suggest to author to use grammarly or any other app that can help edit the content^^ It would really be of great help..

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