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The all thing is craped together that it is unreasonable hard to read make space I have read 3chps and it still looks ugly so please fix it. The all thing feels like you had a hangover well writing it make no sense for the first 2chps try fixing that too.

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Young Justice: Red-Eclipse

Knight_Hawke

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Knight_HawkeTác giảKnight_Hawke

ight

_VOIDLESS_:ama check
Knight_Hawke
Knight_HawkeTác giảKnight_Hawke

I fixed it

_VOIDLESS_
_VOIDLESS_Lv4_VOIDLESS_

ama check

Knight_Hawke:I fixed it