Review Detail of Kingo_Tepes in The 100 : The duty of a leader

Like most before it, I feel like this 100 fanfic has joined the ranks of being cringey as shit! From the way the MC interacts with the people around him to the way be talks to them. The author has used the common troupe of befriending Spacewalker and starting to right out flirt with Octavia the first time they talk. Some may say be wasn't flirting but the author did not put the (Octavia giggled softly) if it wasn't intended to mean he...fuck, I'm ranting. I was excited about reading this book for I thought it would be different.