Review Detail of Fenly_Arismaya in I’d Rather Die

Here I am, Kimmy Yamashira, author of Crystal Pair (English Version)! So now I done read chapter one. That's so detailed. In activity, physicall charachter, I love it. I can imagine how perfect that man and the atmosphere in this story. But, I feel sorry, why you didn't put dialogue tag ("...") for conversation? So put that, and I will be enjoy to read ur book. But overall, thats a good story! I love it! Keep going!