about the writing quality... i don't have much to say, since GODOFCAT already pointed out the mistake, which was THE TENSE, since it is very important in descriptive detail, which you were very good at... and i vote 4 stars is for updating stability, since i noticed that the last update was already 2 days ago.... and much more recommended for author to update at least 1 chap per day.... and I can't say anything much... ah... there was still the synopsis, just try to make it shorter like a hundred words and make it interesting... and i cant say anything much really... your world background is superb, the character design had life, and that's it.... continued updating author! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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