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giốngSweatercat:I am seeing two book covers (black haired girl and blue haired girl) but no sauce for any of them.image
Kurupts:I got them both off Pinterest… I have no idea what source they come from…
Hello author, I have a request more than a question. Can you post a picture of the heroines? for the mc's mom, it could be raikou, from fate go, the voluptuous milf with purple hair, she is quite overprotective of her son and at the same time has a very... ara ara... you understand for the other girls, i will leave it up to you author and thanks for the story Pd: she is raikou
Dantrlan:Hello author, I have a request more than a question. Can you post a picture of the heroines? for the mc's mom, it could be raikou, from fate go, the voluptuous milf with purple hair, she is quite overprotective of her son and at the same time has a very... ara ara... you understand for the other girls, i will leave it up to you author and thanks for the story Pd: she is raikouimage
He doesn’t even lose? He won? I can’t make him insanely overpowered or that ruins future events… I‘m sorry I’m not into godly overpowered MC’s right off the bat!
Zerus:it's a very good novel but chapters 23 and 24 messed it up a bit for me i found the mc dominant 1000 times better
First I want to say that I really like this novel. But I also really dislike how much the Mc dislikes the heroines. I understand that he is mentally unwell and the heroines were mean to him. They probably even tortured him. Still that was because how he acted and the Mc's guidance. He purposely acted as a villain so he should know that very well. The heroines aren't awful humans. They all just have extreme personalities. The only bad thing about them is their thoughts about being in a novel. They don't think about how they want to escape their pre-determined fate/destiny. Instead they just don't want to not follow the plot of the novel. They are almost the same thing but there is one very big difference. The heroines in this novel doesn't try to change their destiny using the knowledge they get from the Mc. They choose to just replace the protagonist with the Mc and become his slave. He did kinda force them to follow him after realizing that they can hear his thoughts. But I still stand by my point. While this also isn't really a problem but he doesn't cultivate and mainly grows stronger through the system's rewards. There also doesn't seem to be any clear rules about how he gets rewarded by the system. The worst part about this novel is probably the "protagonist". He is an extreme version of a perverted and arrogant Chinese Mc. He also is really stupid and he gets too little screen time to make you see him as the Mc's rival or just a real threat to the Mc overall.
Lazy_Chicken_God:First I want to say that I really like this novel. But I also really dislike how much the Mc dislikes the heroines. I understand that he is mentally unwell and the heroines were mean to him. They probably even tortured him. Still that was because how he acted and the Mc's guidance. He purposely acted as a villain so he should know that very well. The heroines aren't awful humans. They all just have extreme personalities. The only bad thing about them is their thoughts about being in a novel. They don't think about how they want to escape their pre-determined fate/destiny. Instead they just don't want to not follow the plot of the novel. They are almost the same thing but there is one very big difference. The heroines in this novel doesn't try to change their destiny using the knowledge they get from the Mc. They choose to just replace the protagonist with the Mc and become his slave. He did kinda force them to follow him after realizing that they can hear his thoughts. But I still stand by my point. While this also isn't really a problem but he doesn't cultivate and mainly grows stronger through the system's rewards. There also doesn't seem to be any clear rules about how he gets rewarded by the system. The worst part about this novel is probably the "protagonist". He is an extreme version of a perverted and arrogant Chinese Mc. He also is really stupid and he gets too little screen time to make you see him as the Mc's rival or just a real threat to the Mc overall.
I reread my comment after your comment and I'm sorry for not reading it before posting. I could have easily deleted its small problems if I had just reread it before posting it.
Jheydi327:For real though.. The MC just A Barindead person.. Cant even control his Mentality..