Review Detail of spinxino in Uncommon DC

I ******* had enough of brain dead mc, and illogical females loving mc at first sight (not jealous) My goal by the end of the novel is to make a MC with common sense, logical, and reasonable deduction. I'll be using analytical reasoning, cause and effect. Lets hope I won't be illogical, irrational, and incoherent. If it occurs, please warn me