Review Detail of zero_m in Ninjago. Another chance

It over all is good my only problem is the writing such as in one of the chapters after the mc finishes speaking it was wrote sais he and while I can deal with misspelling this is a little much for me, I would recommend using something to proof read such as google docs and then fixing the red highlighted words. other than that its fine and I have not seen a Ninjago ff before so with some editing this could be pretty good.