Review Detail of UnreliableJones_ in Forever Dreaming

WritingWithJones has transformed into ReviewingWithJones! The writing quality is, in my eyes, really well written! I didn't see any grammatical errors or typos. Since this a pretty recent novel, I still have no idea of the frequency of updates. Since this is still in the second chapter, the story is pretty underdeveloped, though I will change it once we get deeper into this. The character's are good and their personalities are different. I still don't know much about the world background, but I'll change my rating once we get more chapters.