Review Detail of Falkner_tales in The Vampire Diaries: scars under the crimson veil

I'm writing this review so this fanfic will show up in ranking according to webnovel traditions, firstly the chapter updates will be 3 chapters a week maybe a extra chapter on weekends, I'm a newbie writer writing for fun but I'll try my hardest not to drop my first novel. any future ideas and constructive critisism is welcomed in paragraph comments section. peace out ✌️