Well, shoot. I'd easily rank the writing quality at somewhere within the top 10-20% percentile here on WN. I saw very few grammatical errors, if at all, and the narration comes across like the hero telling us what's going on and giving commentary here and there. Not sure why, but I'm reminded of those teen series that used to air on Disney and Nickelodeon back in the day. PS - it's 'body transference', not 'body transferring' :)
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