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The writing quality is good the story development is at the early stages so it gets 1 star. the character design is a 3, with not too much depth, and the updates are very slow so 1 star The world background is Naruto so it is not a novel that needs any effort to do a world background. So In total, it's a 3. I don't think that you portrayed Rasa right. the love interest if it is shinsuki is kinda cliche and very bland and generally speaking as a gaara fan fic it's meh it could be better but it's alright.

Gaara: The Guardian of Sand

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