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Too pathetic opening paras Author ... Why waste resources for 13 year and then abandon the kid ? Could have simply giving the kid for adoption or left him for good when he was born ? 🤷 Dumb scenario author .. Just dumb scenario .. Making him suffer is logical for the plotline of the story by putting B.S and butchering the plotline to garner more sympathy for the character ain't attractive . It makes people drop the novel 🤷🤦‍♂️ ... I couldn't even continue reading the novel after reading the opening scene . It's an fantasy novel though logic is bit required for the viewers to be kept hooked for predictability which the novel requires massively . Do look into it , rewrite a few chapters , sharpen the plot and interact with the audiences to make this novel successful . Cheer !

Reincarnated as the Demon King's Son

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