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Tiffany_Co
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The book starts off really strong, giving you a glimpse of a woman in unideal circumstance that causes her to have trust issues in people. This captures your attention and you want to learn more about the woman and hoping she finds her voice. But after a while the author starts repeating things over and over almost as a filler to fill up a chapter. It takes 20 chapters to get to the next scene only to talk about the same thing over and over. It’s quite annoying and a money grab. I can no longer support this type of writing or the author.

Divorced My Scum Husband, Married His Evil brother

ForeverPupa

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akukit
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the thing is author your ml just doesn't feel right. it's like she went from a cheater of a husband to another dickhead. if that sound bad then it's probably why, you should stop self inserting yourself in your writing . you make the story look like the women will finally escape clutches then live wih her head held high but instead we have ml. and his stupid narcissistic ideology . he literally blocked her from having any opportunity and you want us the readers to ship them together. let's be honest, you are just writing your masochist fantasy. your other book also started great but hen turned out the ml was also cheater and it made me drop th novel at that point. you just wants the mc to feel like they are cucked. it's not wrong to write That but you should put warning a sign of ntr woul b appreciated very much in your other work too. if you wanted to write angst then you could have said so in summary but you make it seem like women will be in power but at the end she will be dependent on ml. extremely poorly written female character. and a annoying ml. you should know that with world , plot and character , if any of those tank your whole novel become dumb and repetitive .

ForeverPupa:Thank you for the honest review, I’m sorry if you feel that way Currently i’m learning to get better in pacing, and the story pacing starts get better overtime if i may say so
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ForeverPupa
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Thank you for the honest review, I’m sorry if you feel that way Currently i’m learning to get better in pacing, and the story pacing starts get better overtime if i may say so

Bukooooooooooola
BukooooooooooolaLv4Bukooooooooooola

Here is a honest review 👆... It's really been frustrating especially the never ending repetitions. The story is nice but why should I read about one event over and over again, spanning over more than 60 pages, and the story was on a standstill for about another 100 and something pages. and then just for us to continue the repetitions over again ugh!