Review Detail of BookWorms007 in Picking up Girls With My System

This novel had huge potential. But the author failed to capitalise on the novel idea. Let me explain. Author fails to properly flush out the characters and hence they seem 2 dimensional. The world is poorly explained . The conversations seem bland. To top it all of, the MC thinks with his lower half. For a novel to be successful , plot should take the centre stage ( and not R18) . Otherwise , there is no difference between this novel and a p*rno.