Review Detail of Usiel in Ritual Ascension - A multiversal journey (HP start)

First of all it's really tiring to read all that whining. I've started to skim most of the paragraphs for this reason. IF's are way too much. The whole of this fiction could've been written in 20 chapters. Rest of it is pure whining. MC is not a smart one for sure. Good luck to the author.