Review Detail of zippzapp in Naruto : The Eternal flame

33chaps in The story is better than i thought i could write. I like the story overall. Even after a lot of revisions and checking there are a few spelling mistakes that i didn't notice here and there in the story that i plan on fixing later, maybe, but it doesn't impact the story much. For a first proper story that i wrote i would say i did a good job.