Review Detail of BasedHaremDisliker in Naruto: The Descent Of Darkness
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The story is confusing and gives you whiplash at the speed in which it changes scenes. It's super edgy past the cool edgy to the "Tonight will be the night that I fall for youuu🖤". This is the kinda guy to dye his hair black and make "cool" edits about his 14 dollar katana.
Naruto: The Descent Of Darkness
KyuuSushi
Được 4 người thích
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At the start of the story we are thrown into a skirmish between what I assume was iwa and konoha. There is no explanation about the character. How the character got there. Normally there is some sort of flash back but I was an hour in with no explanation. Like, where did this character come from and how did he end up in Naruto? What is his goal? The story also jumps around in the timeline or character perspective without making any sort of effort to put some middle writing/marking to show a change in time or character perspective. Like when the story went from Madara's cave to Asuma running into a house then back to the character who was singing the house. The only good part of the story is the world it's in.
KyuuSushi:I don't understand how the story is confusing for you. I admit it is edgy (I even made the title edgy). But since you do not like this story, I hope you find a story that fits your taste.^^